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Week 8 hot16 Vs 7
Rules
16 lines
3-0= KO
4-1= TKO
1st to 5 votes wins
No Free-posting until match is all voted up
Votes should be explained thoroughly
No Feeding
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Drop Due Wednesday at 11:59 PM Eastern Time
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My heart has left me on a road not suitable .
For a person to walk upon, feats unexcuseable .
See if i get through to you ,
With messages manuvered through ,
The pains and torments that leave a pool of you dilusional .
oh snaps.. could key somethin right now but fuck u nigga
..Blessed is he who shepherds the weak through the valley of darkness, for he is the finder of lost children. I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance those who attempt to destroy my brothers. And you will know my name is the Lord when I lay my vengeance upon you.Jules-S.L. Jackson-Ezekiel 25:17-GODOriginally Posted by HoneyDip
^WORD^
Now we all know this niggas itchin, but he'll catch a "double L" then move on //
Serve this "chicken", then hit him, with free "biscuits" like KFC coupons //
This broke nigga dont load figures unless he takes it in the rear //
Grove niggas bouncin..
Oprah gave em their first real meal in years //
Aint nobody stoppin ya on your path to get "pop"ular //
He's ideal date, candles at a standstill, "rapped" in lube, and some op-er-a //
Jimi Hendrix for all these tennants, stretch him like his gymnastics did //
Fat lady screamin daily with every punch I throw at this bitch //
How you gunna boast bro, only thing you throw is "low blows" //
And what life you got, with over 2 thousand odd posts?? //
Even hoes on the prowl , see how you get down, and it gets crazy //
Kuz son talk out loud but even the detects found out you couldnt "dick" tracey //
So watch a beast end this bent fiend, he's nothin but an eaze win //
Batti bwoi, on a site full of niggas, in his Bio he's beggin for a PM! //
You was at the top then you fell, like barrels in wells //
And you can quote any bible verse, I'll still put you through hell
My heart has left me on a road not suitable .
For a person to walk upon, feats unexcuseable .
See if i get through to you ,
With messages manuvered through ,
The pains and torments that leave a pool of you dilusional .
listen kid uz a son to me, so its like im battlin my next of kin..
but after this i'll be known as a pedo how i abuse this hot16...
u fucking with 7deadly sins, u not a winner and too soft to be a sinner..
ur daily routine like ur last win, u could only get a beat with fingerz...
im one of the greats who spit fire, u can never be iller..
u kinda like hhg's dentist cuz ur verses are nothing but fillers...
ya type's soft, saw ur lil pussy fight with that other nigga like dyke wars..
and u can add up the numbers on ur name but u still wont bring heat like I does...
u aint hiphop, the way u talk? u best follow other trends like jazz or be-bop..
hot16? pssh! this nigga wouldnt drop a good bar if he smashed up a sweet shop...
he posted last minute with hopes of the battle being a no-show..
but i best pause this cuz line for line my verse is considered a low blow...
and even tho we dont kno the nigga but his sig shows he's a emo homo..
so hot16 dont mean he spit bars, he's just sayin dimelo dimelo i dips it low...
..Blessed is he who shepherds the weak through the valley of darkness, for he is the finder of lost children. I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance those who attempt to destroy my brothers. And you will know my name is the Lord when I lay my vengeance upon you.Jules-S.L. Jackson-Ezekiel 25:17-GOD^WORD^
funny at the fact we both used the low-blow line,
granted it was a different scheme.
Either he's feedin or thats the irony of things.
Waitin for the votes
My heart has left me on a road not suitable .
For a person to walk upon, feats unexcuseable .
See if i get through to you ,
With messages manuvered through ,
The pains and torments that leave a pool of you dilusional .
lol damn now i notice it.. hell i keystyled the shit after readin ur verse so it must have been in my subconscious
..Blessed is he who shepherds the weak through the valley of darkness, for he is the finder of lost children. I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance those who attempt to destroy my brothers. And you will know my name is the Lord when I lay my vengeance upon you.Jules-S.L. Jackson-Ezekiel 25:17-GOD^WORD^
aight, I think I am surprised about the outcome of dis battle...let me break it down
intro/outro: hot 16- 7's intro....was just so played...I think i remember seeing people use that against him or some variation every battle he has had here....16's intro was a little humorous and good and his outro also made me chuckle.
flow/multi: tie- I think it was pretty much even here flow wise...Multis didn't really appear this battle
punches: hot 16- I think his was just more fresh and entertaining in result, effective. 7 had some moments as well but 16's overall was just better imo
personals: tie- some pretty good jabs but nothing really stuck out on either side. This cat was about even in this battle.
wordplay: hot 16- 16 had some alright wordplay in this battle. Still nothing so impressive but enough to win this category.
final vote: hot 16
I think 7 may have rushed this and hot 16 actually took some time to drop a decent drop and imo it shows.
stop crying dro!--
And I am dat nigga! --
king 07 and beyond--
N.I.G.G.A never ignorant getting goals accomplished
Only G-d can judge me
ill be back to vote
aka complex symmetry
aka kidney
aka oral lepercy
aka ya mother
Multies: 7
Wordplay: 7
Punches: 7
Flow: 7
Personals: 7
Intro/Outro: 7
Your Father: 7
I WIN
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..Blessed is he who shepherds the weak through the valley of darkness, for he is the finder of lost children. I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance those who attempt to destroy my brothers. And you will know my name is the Lord when I lay my vengeance upon you.Jules-S.L. Jackson-Ezekiel 25:17-GOD^WORD^
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