learn from your mistakes

[Renasanz]

There’s no room left to compensate, the markets all flooded, like after a hurricane/
We all fight for the same, crumbs on the plate, little did we know we couldn’t even get a taste/
the shit that we was eating, to them isn’t considered a steak/
And all the great lengths, just chained to the same place/
over idolizing gold finger and other brothers in the game/
No one round here’s doing shit but wasting cells in a brain/
But it’s prolly a lot better then being celled in, and contained/
So forget pushing wieght, get a job and just save/
Cause I watched those old dudes, rocking gold chains/
Live in the slums, even though there cars banged/
Still realize no matter its all the same,
You get a bitch you have a kid, then you pass on your name/
If you make it past 25, prepare for the journey to the grave/
Just live and learn but always learn from your mistakes/

[PunchlinePrince]

This Was A Nice Lil Drop Overall, I Like The Message You Sendin Wit This, You Brung The Reality To This One, I Can Relate To What You Are Saying. The Only Thing That I Saw Wrong Was That The First Two Bars Were Kinda Stretched Compared To The Rest Of Your Lines, But You Mighta Rapped It A Certain Way On Audio To Make It Work. Just Some Real Talk Feedback....

[Gotham]

This drop was pretty nice overall. Like prince said, you came real with this one and kept it truthful while at the same time more street. I'm glad to see you didn't go all ghetto superstar thug on a topic like this, because a lot of dudes do that. Your flow was a little choppy at some parts, but an audio of this would sound real good

[ThaRkiteckt]

I Like the substance... And the underlying message. the flow couldve been better. Not saying it was bad but maybe its one of those verses that flow better with your accent... I like it tho it had a Nas type feel to it ..."I AM" Nas tho Not that Street Deciples BS! Good Drop Homie

[Renasanz]

i feel it coming on like high winds,
rain showers, and a storm, that will rock you from within,
its all about time we excape from prison,
love aint the answer, its the problem,
that keeps you from pushing, farther with out looking,
i want to swim free, but a bitch will get a hook in,
when all the stars in perfect alingnment, i find myself rhyming,
with remarkible timing, its all how the beat chimes,
makes me want to speak mind,
change up my life and reflect on some street crime,
develope up a beast line, to give you that weak spine,
ohh damn my man, who's lyen,

whos cryn, give it up to past like a flash back,
i stand aside, view and express so abstract,
just to realise that most of america's wack,
you got the rich, and you got the poor,
you got your gold digger and you got your whore,
did you expect much more,

[Intangible]

i feel it coming on like high winds,
rain showers, and a storm, that will rock you from within,
its all about time we excape from prison,
love aint the answer, its the problem,
that keeps you from pushing, farther with out looking,
i want to swim free, but a bitch will get a hook in,
when all the stars in perfect alingnment, i find myself rhyming,
with remarkible timing, its all how the beat chimes,
makes me want to speak mind,
change up my life and reflect on some street crime,
develope up a beast line, to give you that weak spine,
ohh damn my man, who's lyen,

whos cryn, give it up to past like a flash back,
i stand aside, view and express so abstract,
just to realise that most of america's wack,
you got the rich, and you got the poor,
you got your gold digger and you got your whore,
did you expect much more,

Not bad nice content better with the imagery on this 1, good 2 see its not about gat busting and bullshit that ppl on forums don't actually do ever.
1 thing tho i learnt make sure the spelling is always correct because this is text so when sum1 reads the verse they might interpret the line differently because of how the word is spelt. But over nice drops

[penrino]

Got a cuppla links, Ren?

[Renasanz]

nah i dont market on the net, im not into the whole e world like that with my music, i think it gets your shit swallowed up. i make timeless shit. i'm working on an album right now. ya not a mixtape. i'm on a few mixtapes up in newyork but i never put out my own. thing is i feel if its good enough to record, it should be a record. not a half assed mix. ill let everyone know when its finished ive been making it for almost 2 years now. i got 5 tracks complete and mastered. and 3 more written and im just pushing for 12 tracks with one kinda speach like skit in the mix. ill keep everyone posted.
its called lost cause.

[Renasanz]

reset me to the top of the list, i slack on marketing so most forget,
but listen when i chime in my two scense, im a vet, that gets rep,
from all different sets, understand the problem is usually from with in,
so i grow everyday like im watered with nutrients, who needs proof,
i can read the blueprints, so new and improved that even jesus wont forgive,
so sinister and taboo, loseing touch with all i once knew, just to put my heart on the line, like im marring a slue,