S.G vrs. DiM **ToPikaL**

[$poke!]

Lets say 24 Bars!
due by 12 midnight tommorrow! its 1:40 pm now where I am!
if you have a time issue state it

other than that House rules!!!


Topic: I'll make it simple but interesting!!!!

You and ya right hand man is doing ya thang "whatever that may be"
Ya'll strapped....Niggaz start bussin at you out of the cutt...you spot'em
and start bussing back!....ya man drops and you run out of rounds.....what happens after that???

Now take it and run with it..from that point!

[$poke!]

Me as far as conversation
Homie
Narrarator


Wakes up showers, gets dressed, straps up, hits the streets…

I leave tha house step up tha block grabbed the other strap out the ride
My nigga pulls up in the truck whats up? I jumped inside
Ain’t shit my nigga! jus'tryn'ta'off these rocks! keep and eye out for the cops!
You know we hit tha studio today? Damn I forgot!
Well let me grab some extra cash stop and grab another half!
I got a pound up in tha back, KOOL! then I’ll grab some shrooms

20 minutes Pass………………

Back up in the ride now we studio bound,
fuck! I gotta get some petro and some munchies (giggles) Im down!
Gave him 20 on the petro, and 10 for tha snacks!
He steps inside to pay the fee cause gas ain’t free and all I hear is Pap Pap!
Knew we shouldn’t of stopped here!, on the other side of town
Slugs hittin’ my mans truck as I get low to the ground
Niggas bussin at gas stations they must want us dead,
slug particles hit my face as they whiz pass my head
My nigga saw me bussin crouched down shielded! by the truck!
Coming out tha sto! dropped the bags and started to bust!
Pedestrians faced down screaming like horror flicks,
my nigga drops “aw shit” rapidly I spit and my glock goes “click”
Fuck! my man hit! 1 to the chest and abdomen,
grabbed the 3-5-Sev'n off my back....but I only got 6 shots!
Clear my path to the drivers door,
truck riddled! hit the ignition, now peddles 2 tha floor!
Nigga behind a wooden gate so I swerve on the curb,
nigga runs N2 tha street, now I got this herb!
Hitem wit tha truck, but struck in the head, Im dead and fucked like porn
Im gone! Truck hits a pole, now all you hear is the horn.

Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep

And there you have it...
how a nice day can be soured so fast...
from having a bright future...to a funeral on a rainy day!...
but what can I say!...you live by the gun...you die by the gun...
or truck...
*click-clack*
narrarator cocks his gun
but ey!!! thats life in the streets!..

[DiM]

R.I.P Ill Will Robinson 10-4-2004.

Music Bump'n, Girls Grind'n, Really Didn't Give A Fuck
Peep'n These Tittie Sluts, Smok'n A Grip Of Blunts ..
Had Some 40s In The Trunk, Was Already A Little Drunk
That Powder Puff Taint'd Coke Scent'd Drool'n For A Penis
Coward Cunt, Bick'n Tryna Play, We Know What Her Scheme Is
Bout To Let Her Lick N' Suck, Stoke Wit A Super Soaker Motion
Tounge Swirl'n Throat Chok'n, All The Sudden Walls Expload'n
Quick Zip It Up, Spot The Homie Creep'n Cock'n Swurv'n Steady
Breath'n Heavy, Reach For The Piece Hope These Herbs Is Ready
Pop Up For A Quick Look, Sight Line Spots Shadows On A Sunny Day
Look'n Inconspicous Black Hood'd Wide Eyed In A Funny Way
Amatuers, Time To Let These Guns Go Play, Watch The Sparks Fly
Fuck'n Smart Guys, Ain't Even Cover'd, Blat! My Gat Barks Crys!
Empty A Full Clip Straight At They Whole Clique, Fuck Nothin To Reload
Homie Stands Up,Double Gunn'n Bullets Skip'n Cross The Street Roads
Richocets Bounc'n, They Back On The Load'd Tip Fire'n Tryna Fight Back
I'm Still Crouch'n, Homie Still Pounc'n He Gets Push'd Right Back
His Lights Black, Took A Min To Notice Still In The Heat Of This Moment
Distracted By This Ocean, Sea Of Fuck'n Bullets, Gotta Home In
Grab His Piece Heat Seek'n Shots Fly, My Eyes Blood Stain'd Blind'n Vision
But This Is My Mission, Needa Rid These Fools, My Shots Ain't Miss'n
4 Pop'd Off 3 Clean Cut 2 Get Hitt'n, Crawl'n Back They Get To The Car
Screech'n Out, I Turn To Will, Blood Gang Be Bleed'n, Hospitals To Far
He Took 3 To The Chest, 1 To The Neck, I Clutch Watch Him Die In My Arms ..
My Homie, You Taught Me Everything, Without You I Could Never Manage'd B
My Best Friend, My Brother, Now My Angel, Closes Thing I Got To True Family


To This Day, You Still My Mutha Fuck'n Brother, South East Will Never Forget.

[PunchlinePrince]

This Was A Good Topical Battle, Good Imagery From Both Emcees. I Liked Spoken's Verse, But There Were A Couple Of Lines That Went With The Topic, But Didn't Rhyme. You Did The Same Thing Against SickVick. Those Lines Kinda Mess Up How I Read The Verse Flow. Dim Came With It On This, He Did A Good Job With The Multi's And The Verse Flowed Smoothly In Each Bar. This One Was Close But I'ma Give This To....................

Vote: Dim

[Frak]

Aight heres my vote...

Dim diff had sum nasty multis all over the place, didnt like his storyline as much as i liked Spokens tho, both emcess hit the topic nice, i though both flows were on point.. i also like the endin to spokens...nice job to both

Flow: Tie
Multis: Dim
Storyline: Spoken

Overall: Spoken (cuz his ending kinda of did it 4 me)

[steel soldier]

Good battle to both of ya.

Flow-Dim only because some of ya shit didnt rhyme SG and it fucked the flow up
Vocab-Dim
Multis-Dim
Topic-Dim

I know it looks like a clean sweep but it was alot closer. I could picture both verses very well. Dim's vocab and multis just made me picture it alot more. Felt like I was really there.

Vote-Dim

[SPScarface215]

Flow: DiM
Multis: DiM
Creativity: Even
Story: SG
Vocab: None

I thought yall both couldve used better vocab even though if I was forced to pick, i'd say DiM. SG ya story was tight, I just wish you would've told it better. DiM's story wasnt too bad but he didnt paint it good enough, but he had the superior writing in this one so thats why...

Vote: DiM

It's close though...

[`rino]

Flow : DiM
Topic : Tie
Story : DiM (close)
Imagery : SG

Overall : SG -- Why? Well this was a really really close battle and I don't actually think it deserves the TKO on DiM's behalf. Sure, DiM's verse was good, but so was SG's I would call it a Tie between the two, but I feel for effort alone SG sneaks this one in the bag, so he's got my vote.

[SPScarface215]

It's 3-2 DiM... uppin votes

[$poke!]

yo dont know whats going on with this!?

[HHP]

dim is banned

[kidhustle]

Flow : Tie
Story : DiM
VotE : DiM

I dont know, i just felt he told his story better.............. SG's storyline was nice too, but his "SET UP" wasnt better than DiM's

[SPScarface215]

DiM is not banned... that name is banned but he is Dim Wits now.... unbanned...

4-2 DiM uppin!

[bigdog]

Dim's story was more evolved, it had better multi's and flow, was more complex while SG's was a good verse, but nothing made it special, it was a typical verse i'd expect to find from him, but it wasn't enough...you gotta dig deeper wit this shit SG, attention to details goes along way wit topicals

vote: DiM